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Tantalising and intriguing.Would recommend to many friends interested in erotic novels.The author goes down to every detail to excite the reader

"No dislikes . Interesting and intriguing.keeps the reader in the zone describing every detail and sexual act placing the reader at the scene. Awesome writing"

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"Pure passion I like every bit of it "

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Love this!

"You should make a book out of this shirt. "

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The story

"It's an ok story. For my taste it needs more pain. I'd a little vanilla for me. Keep it going though"

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