Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

I'M STILL SHOOK

"I was thumbing through my "finished" folder, and I came upon your book again. When I first read it, I didn't interact online, but now I leave feedback, and when I saw it, I was like - THIS STORY needs a review! I have never read anything like it. You haven't just written a story. You've asked some serious philosophical questions in a way, and I'm stumped. The ending has me chilled. Just WOW. The way you describe the emotional pain. The backwardness of it all. How the character has to be pulled through the "process" to come back to reality but to the realise he isn't the same after time. It breaks my heart, what is right? I think about this story so often. Randomly, it will pop into my mind. Your story has stuck with me, unlike others, and chills me. I suffer from extreme chronic pain, too much to list. When questioning the concept of the story, I don't even think I would want this for myself... or would I? Would it be pain relief? It goes to some deep questions I've asked myself. Maybe because I suffer pain daily 🤷‍♀️ This story is more than a story. It really has you questioning what is right and wrong in some situations. If, individually, we were given this option, would we take it for a happy life full of pure happiness and joy? They do say ignorance is bliss? I recommend this story to everyone. You need to get to the emotional turmoil at the heart (and when you get there, you will know what I mean). It's a must-read for those who like to ponder bigger questions and meditate on what they've just read. In my opinion, it's much more than just a story. The end is just... you won't be disappointed. We need more thought-provoking content. This has stuck with me for months. I think it always will."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation