Inkitt
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review by Eddie Robson. [email protected]

"Hi Elizabeth. I just finished reading chapter one and found it fascinating. I'm 65 years old and have wondered how women think about sex in general and more specifically, having affairs and what drives them to it all my life. I think I'm about to find out. I suppose there's nothing extra ordinary about your story line but I think it is very well written and your style drew me into wanting to read more; only time constraints stopped me but I certainly mean to read the whole manuscript eventually and give you feedback as I go along. I have submitted my manuscript called 'Scorched Earth' which is an historical novel starting off in Bristol, England in the 1860's and ending in South Africa in 1902 just after the Ango/Boer war came to an end. Perhaps we can be mutually beneficial to each other by you reading mine? Please don't think I'm bargaining with you; I will read your novel anyway; whether you review mine or not. Talk to again soon."

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