An Author's Submission

"I don't know how old this story is or whether the author is still around on Inkitt and seeing this feedback. If you are, I'd appreciate your letting me know so that I will know whether it's worth sending feedback in the future. I intend to read other of your stories. I loved this story. I found the female characters varied and interesting for the most part, which is impressive considering how many of them there are. I don't really have suggestions for how to improve it, other than to note that it really needs to be proofread and cleaned up. Not to be a grammar nazi, but the many errors, quotes left unmarked, and so on made it a chore to read. That's a shame, because I think it really hurts the story. Other than that, nice work. I look forward to reading more. "