Amazing!!!

"The first person perspective is simply perfect for this story from the very beginning – from the moment Champ started introducing himself in points. Each point, besides being very interesting, gives a great insight into Champ’s character, his features and habits. And this is all confirmed throughout the story, since you were very consistent, not missing a thing. Besides having a great eye for details and besides being very careful and consistent, your style of writing is simply amazing, thrilling and enchanting. It makes the reader clearly imagine every situation. I love Champ’s first “meeting” with Hermano de Sangre and how he stays calm and actually bored while Hermano is trying to torture him. This is one of the many, many amusing scenes in the story. Champ’s inner struggle in the last chapter, while he is deciding what to do with the Mayor is so real and deep and made me anxious to see what his decision would be. And I was amazed by his choice and his actions in this scene, although I was not that surprised, since I could’ve expected something like this from Champ, since I did get to know him pretty well throughout the story. I cannot express how much I’ve enjoyed reading this. I love it!"