What is your opinion?
Billionaire's surrogate
"Can't wait for more chapters, please write more."
Billionaire's Surrogate
"The story has a lot of sentiments and a lot of details that make you want to know what the main character is going through but I don't like how the main character is making a lot of mistakes that could have been resolved she had and open opportunities to talk her way out of the situation and she didn't take it "
billionaire ,s surrogate
"please please don't take to long to up date this story I love it so much and want to see how it ends. "
Aswesome
"I choose this rating because I like it. The thing I would change would not threatening her mother."
Wow!
"This is so Good! I hope his wife gets caught in her lies. Please let the truth come out. Let her keep her Baby. ❤️ I’m in the edge of my seat! Love this story. Did she know she was a virgin? Wow wow!"
Excellent
"It is good "
Billionaires surrogate
"I like the story, the curector , the suspense is the right amount, it's nice but spicy "
Highly Recommend
"I hope Robert ends up with Sarah! Valerie is a narcissist! I would definitely recommend to my friends!"
Mr hormis
"Poor Sarah ,she is really helpless I hope she will be happy with Robert eventually "
Not bad, not great either.
"I really like your story line, so far, not bad. Slow going, still have no concrete background on Leo. Maybe more history on him would help. Apart from sleeping with the wife. There are some grammatical errors and for some reason, incomplete sentences. Nothing major, but still noticeable. In closing; Sadly you are a needy budding author who has some compulsion after every chapter to keep asking for followers. You will have to work for that. If I had to chose to follow you here on Inkitt based on this story, I wouldn't. As for someone stealing your story...This is not an original storyline. Bad author's have been stealing storylines, changing critical areas like names, locations, ages, family...all for profit and fame...Sadly. You will be a great writer, with patience, keep learning, proof read your work and have a friend or family member proof read it too! Stop apologizing for any late updates, readers look forward to reading more, make no commitments to next update, but be consistent to keep your readers motivated. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors, and thank you for a glimpse into your imagination and the time it took to write this far. Thank you especially for not trying to overdo this story by adding pictures, apart from the cover photo. Too many amateurs writers add pictures, learn to write before moving on to picture books.🙄"
No ending?
"Shouldn't be left without a conclusion "
