Great beginning ⚔️

"Great beginning! I want to read more. Plot is great. What pain” awaits them?! Mentioned in comments the plot could be honed with more voice given to Anakin. Also, being a sci-fi/ fantasy addict, like real estate 🙈- setting - setting - setting / location location location. I want to be in this training facility smell it, here the echoes of the laser blades electric and alive. I LOVE IT"