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Not Bad for a First

"Overall, the story is well written and driven following a central conflict with smaller conflicts along the way. There are minor grammar issues and it has some of the problems that a first novel would, but those don't stop the over aching enjoyment of the story of Michael Bearenzi."

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"What the most amazing part in adventure, fantasy stories or books is the nature, the description of forests, lakes, rain, animals and plants. I really adore the descriptive parts in this novel. When reading every single word, I kept imagining the high mountains, the moon poking behind the skies, the rain drops on the plants in the forest, the swallow twittering… I liked the book. I liked how the main characters were brave and open to new adventures. I mostly liked Chapter 12 -Welp, We're Lost. It was full of diverse and unexplainable emotions… the ones that a person, being such situation, could only feel."

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