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My 21 Brothers

"This was the first book I read on Inkitt and I absolutely loved it. I just recently found it again and I'm honestly astonished. The writing style and characters are amazing and it's so heartwarming and sweet. Keep up the great work author!"

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Soundous

"Perfect"

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21 brothers

"This book it awesome I love it so much and am that gal that doesn’t read all of Any books or just doesn’t read at all but this is so interesting I love it! And I look forward to after reading this to totally find more books you right!!!😊😘💖 "

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Digital art commission

"HEYYYYY!!!!! I just finished reading your story, and honestly, it’s incredible. Your writing is so vivid and full of emotion — I really felt connected to the characters and the journey they went through. The way you build the world and keep the plot moving made it hard to put down. Since I’m an artist, I got some ideas for cover art that I think would match your story perfectly. I’d love to share them if you are interested!"

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21 Brothers

"So much suspense....Thanks for updating. Looking forward to the next chapter."

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My 21 brothers

"So like it's a pretty decent book had me tossing and turning in joy loved it just I felt it had more potential coming down to the end it started to get confusing like what happened with Carter and Spenser why she so normal now with him after everything? And I felt the reveal on Spenser used to be abused and her cuts and so on could have been bigger cuz they didn't press the matter after one night and the ending got confusing bacially cuz we have blaze and a another brother of Spenser actually saying that why didn't they just leave Spenser at the orphanage and so on and not too wholesome so like yeah one thing id love to happen which didn't😭 is that Spenser didn't just tell her brothers that she's a big assassin or street fighter but like she goes out a night to a underground fight and her brothers end up catching her in that act which would go along with how when she first reached in New York her coach he to done gave her locations better going with the plot and I feel she just revealed everything so much and too fast and her brothers barely had any emotions to her sad and abusive past I wanted more reactions on that, but girlll honestly out of then if rate it a 9.9 it was really good loved the concept just the ending that caught me, but really I loved it thanks for making such a great book girly pop🍰💫❤️ hope you continue to make stories like this amazing stuff my opinion? Girl go and publish this book, i mean? I'd buy it just saying it's so good love it! And girl love you!👑🌹💎❤️❤️❤️❤️✨"

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My 21brothers

"Interesting story line "

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Great

"Great stories"

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Idk hshdhshshshajaja hahahahahahajshajaj Gaga hahahahshs

"Hshshshshshshshsh"

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New chapter

"I loved it, I need a new chapter please!! "

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I love it when people say they don’t know the truth and

"There is no way you could have done it without a second thought to it because I think you were just going for the ride to the beach with your family or friends and I would have been happy if you could do that but it was a lot easier than root for the weekend because I know that was a little more challenging and you know I would have had a lot to deal about it and you know I love you so I hope you’re having an amazing weekend and you guys will be back soon love and I love you bye bye love mom bye bye love mom and I "

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My 21 Brothers

"I like the storyline, but I wish the chapters were longer, and where did the discussion with Alessandro and Spencer go when she came back after what Carter did. Also, what is wrong with him? Noone does what he did to someone they care about."

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Awesome

"Keep up the good work"

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Story

"Please keep writing. I'm enjoying your work."

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GIRLS SHOULD BE HAPPIER NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS IN LIFE

"I LOVE THIS CAHPTER I HOPE THEY WILL REALLY SEE THEIR PRICELESS SISTER LIKE HOW STRONG SHE IS AND HOW LOVELY GREAT DESCRIPTION AND I HAD REALLY BEAUTIFULL TIME WITH IT CONTINUE PLS MAY GOD BLESS U"

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I love the navel

"I love the navel I want some more navel like this "

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Funny and relatable

"I loved this book because it was actually hilarious and relatable. I would recommend this to most of my friends, I actually told at bunch of my friends about this app and they downloaded it."

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I really liked your novel and I hope you can continue ..

"I liked the plot so please update"

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What a life

"That poor girl has been through hell and the boys don't know any of it. If they would use there brains and think they would go talk to the ones closest to her to find out about her past and why she is the way she is. "

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MOREEE

"MOREEEE! POST MORE"

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