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12 chapters in...

"Already hooked, scared there wont be another chapter at the end of each one "

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I love it!

"It's great so far! It doesn't have the same predictable plot points that other novels have which keeps it interesting!"

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Enjoyable Read

"I'm enjoying the book so far. The "coming of age" for a shifter that doesn't know they are a shifter is something I hadn't read previously. "

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Shy

"Love the pot and character development and the mystery"

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Great read need more

"I know this is her trauma but it's a good story line and yes he is adding to it but also making sure she is safe and has a better understanding due to her mother should of told her in the beginning. Loving it so far."

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Really good

"Do far so good but why if there only 12 chapters?"

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Keeps your attention

"Well written. Good plot. Interesting characters. Takes a bit to get going but keeps your attention. Grayson's evasion is rather frustrating. I would recommend this book."

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Exciting story

"Just starting to get to the good part. Would be nice if it was ever finished"

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"the plot keeps you interested "

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Shy

"I enjoy it’s easy. reading. I can pick it up at anytime "

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Good read

"Itis a nice story so far"

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Shy

"Love reading it... i like the plot of the story.❤️❤️❤️"

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Choppy

"There’s no definitive change from one moment to the next. It just jumps to a completely different thing that’s happening "

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Shy

"I like it so far, can't wait for the rest of it. When can we read the rest of the book?"

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Like it so far

"It’s seems to be flowing and no mistakes so far with the exception of the age. Is she 16 or 17?"

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So far so good.

"I'm ten chapters in and im really loving this story. I really hope they tell Indianna what's happening soon because she's gonna be so pissed when she finds out. "

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Shy

"Great book, loving the story line!"

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More please

"I like the writing however sometimes the grammar isn’t correct or there are missing words. Otherwise it’s a good read."

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Very Good

"Wish you had published this as a book because this is amazing! Can’t wait to read more!"

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