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Good book

"I enjoyed this book, especially the characters "

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Traded

"What an amazing book. It keep you going ever which way. 3 down and I have to pick another. You are an amazing writer with amazing mind. Hope you don't stop. A1 book..."

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Traded

"Liked the twist"

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Traded

"Sooo good love this book ❤️"

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Nice

"It’s nice it’s interesting, and it has many plot twists "

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Needs editing, but a good concept and story

"The author needs to do some heavy editing of: punctuation, grammar, spelling, proper capitalization, etc. In some places the story can be a little soap opera style, as if the writer rushed to put thought on paper. The story can be great with some work. No erotica, which was a nice surprise with all the open opportunities the characters had. I was worried it would go that route after the lingerie scene. The sister and Milo never received their finish, as if they were pushed aside and forgotten. Really can be great with some more intentional work."

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"Hikaye ne kadar güzel yazılsa da yarım bırakılmış sonu olmayan yazı hoş değil."

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