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Pretty disturbing😭

"The storyline is so good buy disturbing at the same time The writing is pretty but truly i don't want anyone to feel like her It's a solid 9.5/10 (-0.5 for making me cryyyy)"

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Relatable

"This is so relatable, when i was 15 the same type of thing happened to me, except the guy was family. Thank you for writing this"

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This is so lit. I never know whats next....just love it

"I rate it at 5 since the plot is marvelous. I felt cringe imagining since i have a small sister. Nevertheless this is wonderful"

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Horrifyingly beautiful

"Seriously it had me on the edge, it’s the feeling.. knowing what’s gonna happen. And then it happens, and it’s not any less scary than how you imagined it to be. Joelene is beautiful and painful and you’ll feel the fear well up in your gut as you read it. An absolute 5 star"

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So great

"This was my first time reading this kind of books but I’m in love with them now. This is what I’m going to do every time I feel exhausted "

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Couldn't stop reading!

"I read this entire thing within twenty minutes, it was such an emotional roller coaster and I just had to keep reading till I finished it, you are super talented!"

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I love your writing style

"It’s an interesting story and I love the subject matter and romantic tension "

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Joelene

"Can't get enough of her writing. Whatever she throws, I am willing to collect all of them without any complaint. My only request is, never ever stop writing when you are really blessed with the skill, because that would break my heart. ✨️🤍✨️"

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Joelene

"This was an amazing poem that young girls should read. That there a guys out there looking for flesh and yes they can be very good looking but they don't actually love you. They love what you'll give up for offer. The way the author wrote this was very great and descriptive. Will totally read again. "

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Joelene

"I liked the story"

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Jolene

"I really loved your book! Im a young gal myself and im only 15 years old and i do understand the whole book I knew when i starting the book I knew i was going to click to it like its for me you know."

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I like everything about this novel. It keeps my imagination amazed.I like how everything description of the scene was clear .The problem I had was maybe Im not sure if it's because I didn't read properly but I don't have a clear imagine of what Eric features are nor height to fill the grap in my imagination of the scenes

"I like everything about this novel. It keeps my imagination amazed.I like how everything description of the scene was clear .The problem I had was maybe Im not sure if it's because I didn't read properly but I don't have a clear imagine of what Eric features are nor height to fill the grap in my imagination of the scenes"

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Jolene

"I loved the plot, and the characters are great, a lot of describing which is very helpful to picture the book. "

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Amazing

"I really loved the format of this and how it was told. So much details, and so much feelings put into this!"

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Cutely written 😭

"I loved t so much💜💜"

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Love this!

"This is wow!!!!!"

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Joeline

"I loved this whole story. Ultimately I wish the ending was a bit different, but I understand why it ended that way. "

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Breathtaking

"Oh my GOD, WAS THIS GOOD. I have absolutely no words to describe this. Incredibly exciting, well written, beautiful but also kinda sad at the end. I feel bad for Joelene.. I wanna see the future though, I read this is half an hour and was hooked till the end. Kudos to the author!! "

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Sooo good!

"Loved it! You're soo good! 💗"

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Joelene

"Awww, I felt so sorry for Joelene cause he really took her 1st everything and then left her. This was an amazing short and sweet story 💗💗💗"

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