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Haunted in a haunted farmhouse

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Summary

A Family Moves into an old farmhouse, not knowing that it's haunted, until a mysterious person starts haunting them, and lures the mom away from the rest of the family.

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: Moving Into an old Farmhouse

The Palmer Family was in their blue Mini-Van down the road, they were following a moving van, they were moving into an old farmhouse, that was in a peaceful country setting, Glen Palmer was sitting in the driver-seat of the mini-van, he was 40-years-old, he was 6'8, short brown hair, hazel eyes, he was Caucasian, he was wearing under-wear, pants, shirt, socks, shoes, sitting in the front passenger seat was his wife Veronica Palmer, she was also Caucasian, she was 38-years-old, she was 5'9, shoulder length long blonde hair, blue eyes, she was wearing underwear, bra, pants, shirt, socks, shoes, sitting in the back seat was their 3-year-old Toddler son named Timothy Palmer, he was also Caucasian, he was 4'9, short light brown hair, hazel eyes, sitting in the back seat was their 18-year-old son named Keith Palmer, he hated that they were moving from North Creek, to a small little town called Berk falls, they were going to live in an old farmhouse that was nestled in a peaceful country setting, Keith hated it when his parents made him move, leave all of his friends behind.


about an hour later they arrived at the farmhouse, Keith was looking at it from the mini-van window, it was a white 2-story farmhouse, with a shaded in front porch, a shaded in back porch, a shaded in balcony, it had a wooden fence around a vast field, the family got out of the mini-van, Glen and Veronica were telling the movers where to put their stuff, while they were unloading all of the family's belongings out of the van.


not knowing that something or someone was watching them from a distance, the mysterious person was looking at Veronica, about an hour later, the Palmers were busy unpacking their belongings and putting them away, after the movers had left.


"Veronica, I think that the boys and I are going into town to get a pizza for supper tonight", Glen said.



"All Right, just be careful", Veronica replied.



Glen, Timothy, and Keith walked out of the house, got into the mini-van, and drove off, leaving Veronica alone in the house, she continued taking stuff out of tote boxes and was putting them away, not knowing that someone was watching her, the mysterious person was watching her every move, the mysterious person slowly move up behind her, and softly blows the back of Veronica's shoulder length long blonde hair on her head softly, she turned around and was looking around, she didn't see no-one there, she continued working.

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