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great read

"its a good read - little editing required, but over all a great story with plots a.d twists"

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You think you'll get the whole

"Mcmtu je kita Fiji Ka you have your "

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Its a cute fast read

"Its a quick fun read"

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His destiny

"I love it...nice story...hoping to read more from you Sage..thank youtake care and good luck"

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I love this

"Hope nate goes to he'll!"

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His Destiny

"This was a very good story 💗💗💗"

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Nicely Written 🤗

"I like the way you get your readers attention. It was written well yet you need to changed or checked those spellings and grammar too. To sum up your story is beautiful and nicely written. Keep it up. God blessed author. If you are free please drop a little reviews on my stories too at https://www.inkitt.com/aphrodite10 Thank you hugs and kisses Aphrodite 💕"

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His destiny

"I like it a lot"

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Ummm

"Let’s check the end of it , the story is promising I think it’s need good writing "

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His Destiny

"I’m glad it had a happy ending. Good story over all. "

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His destiny?

"I didn't find this book very engaging. Everything about it was mediocre, except for the spelling and grammar which was abysmal. It needs a thorough edit to even be readable. I made it about halfway before I finally gave up. Sorry to have to leave such a negative review, but this is my honest opinion. I think the author has real potential but the lack of proofreading will hold them back. "

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Not to bad

"Not really sure how I feel about this story. It wasn't a bad storyline it was actually ok. The writing style was okay but the grammatical errors were atrocious. I would recommend a lot of editing and spell checking because sometimes the grammatical errors made it hard to follow the story."

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It's okay

"Needs editing, plot holes, the conflict was not convincing enough. Characters are written okay. "

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