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Mafia's Love
"Goed verhaal jammer dat het zo snel geëindigd is."
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Amazing
"This book is very captivating "
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Mafias love
"Ooo lm sorry this was so short. Loved it 🥰 "
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5 chapters read
Very good
"I don’t like how it repeats what happened in each pov. I don’t know if anyone who reads like I do The rating is based off how I like the book so far "
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Wow
"It's amazing and I love it ❤️.I can't wait for the next chapter"
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4 chapters read
Mafia love
"Loki I believe has an alternate motive, obvious he saw his brother bring in Mara. Not cool too a ask Mara to do that favor for him either"
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4 chapters read
Good story
"Great story. I’m sure why the stories on here are so short🌹"
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4 chapters read
Good
"It's good so far it really fasinatin"
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Mithuzz12
"Do not write both pov if u r not going to tell us something extra, like maybe transition of what he saying as he is speaking different language or their thoughts on different perspectives "
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4 chapters read
Amazing!
"I loved the whole thing! Can’t wait for more updates! "
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4 chapters read
😍😍😍
"😍 wow hmmmm"
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Oh wow
"I kept reading because even though at first it seemed a bit repetitive, the plot was intriguing. I was proved right by waiting and saw the abrupt change in writing by the author. They got their punctuation and grammar correct and took into account the repetition of POV’s. I’m excited to ride this rollercoaster of a story. "
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2 chapters read
Just keep reading
"At first it seems that the writer has struggled a bit but it looks as if they took everyone's review into consideration and made the book better. I didn't even expect such a plot twist so early in the book and I'm really excited where they're going to take this."
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4 chapters read
Mafias love
"The book is ok but could use some touch up it’s ok to read hope there is more"
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4 chapters read
Idk
"It's just that it seems rushed"
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4 chapters read
Ehh it's hot though
"Needs some editing "
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3 chapters read
Mafia's love
"I like the fact that the writer incorporate other characters POV and not just one person. Their spelling could use a bit more work in some places and the way they describe places are really innovated."
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4 chapters read
It was ok
"Not sure if I’d read this again. There weren’t many glaring obvious mistakes but the writing style was pretty wooden. Was this written in a different language and interpreted? Too many plot holes and in some areas explanations were completely omitted. Good potential and I hope the author can maybe go over it in the future"
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4 chapters read
Required title.
"Review for what purpose? Only 4 chapters given here - not much. Requiring the reader to know both English and Italian doesn't feel good. Repeating the exact same chapter from the other person's view felt extreme repetitive, likely also for the author as it felt uninspired. The plot has promises but hard to tell after 2 chapters... I am still interested in seeing where this will go. Has good things language wise, I can ignore the lack of proofreading."
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