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Lifetime Movie

"I’ve read both of these books three or four times, and they still pull me in every single time. I keep coming back for more: and that alone says how powerful this story is. If this isn’t true love, then what is? At the heart of the story is an unexpected and deeply emotional relationship- while the age difference might seem unconventional at first , the relationship unfolds into something incredibly raw, genuine, and beautifully complex. The author does an amazing job exploring not just romance, but healing, growth, and the courage it takes to love again. This is more than just a love story-it’s about finding hope in unexpected places ( aka the wrong pool) and redefining what love can look like. It’s emotional, captivating, and absolutely unforgettable. A must-read! "

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Wow, what a beautiful story!

"Wow!! The best story I have read for a little while. Yay what a beautifully written story!! Love your writing style! "

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18 rules part 2

"Beautiful story! Just wished you would have continued the story just a little longer, to the baby’s birth!"

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18 rules book 2

"I love both of these characters!!! The way the story is written has me feeling like I’m in the middle of it and feeling all the emotions as the characters are. I have laughed, I have cried… but I really hope they make it. My favorite part is when they started telling Jay’s friends and retold their story… and I loved that Cera and Ellie seem to like Liza. That seems to make the story go better. Everyone’s reactions to their relationship also seem very realistic. I am worried that Jay is going to change his mind. I wasn’t worried about him at all but his closeness with Ellie also has me concerned…?!? I hope it all works out for Jay and Liza, thank you for such an exciting book!! "

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What-A-LOVE Story!!!

"I need me a J.O.Y. What a truly magnificent man. ❤️"

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I totally recommend

"Soooo good!"

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2 world's collide

"I have loved every chapter of this book, and it has been quite surreal how it has similarities to my current situation"

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Great read

"Love this story!"

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OMG

"❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍❤️🤩💕 I'm so in love with the characters. "

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Couldn't put it down

"Author gets you emotionally attached to characters so that you can't put the book down. Well done"

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So very lovely

"After reading the first book I couldn't wait to read this and it didn't disappoint. It's written so beautifully and so thoughtfully. Truly loved it, thank you."

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Wow

"This was a very amazing roller-coaster of a read. Loved this so much! "

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5 stars emotional

"Definitely recommend for soft hearts raw emotions throughout the story really enjoyed it "

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Awwwh

"Great story! Couldn't put both books down"

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18 Rules (For Disaster and Desire)

"This was Part 2 of the 18 Rules book. I loved this story so much. The love that Jay and Liza have for each other is just overwhelming! I could actually feel it while reading this book. Their life is not perfect, but how can you not root for them. All I can say is that I hope that a Part 3 is in the works! Amazing story Author! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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18 Rules (For Disaster and Desire

"Excellent book! I couldn't stop reading it until I got to the end. Loved the ending. You are a very talented writer. "

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18 Rules

"Awesome read I must say. I was glad when I found out it has part two. Was glued from start to finish. Well done."

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18 Rulers

"Amazing and great plot. Characters are great. Thank you author."

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Juds

"It really brings out the message of how we complicate things way too much and live up to society standards and what is considered normal"

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18 Rules

"This story flows so perfectly. I loved it. Will read it again. Sad tears and happy tears, absolutely wonderful. "

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