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Who knew Dragons could be cryptic

"I didn't realize it until the end, but this is the second book I've read of this author and I enjoyed both immensely. It's a well crafted story that keeps you guessing for the first part until it gets its rhythm. Then it soars, if you read it you will understand that pun. Once the FMC makes her transition the story picks up and it still keeps you guessing for the most part. The author does a nice job of laying out the surroundings so that you can clearly see the differences in landscapes and appreciate the differences. The characters have depth to them, differences that set them up in their world and allow you to watch the interactions more clearly. The beginning reads like a flashback or dream sequence, yet once you understand what is going on then it flows well into the rest of the story. The ending is set up well and once you get there you might feel a sense of accomplishment on the FMC's part, at least I did. She fought against the inevitability of the story and was able to tweak things to her betterment along the way. I highly recommend this story to anyone who enjoys Fantasy, Dragons, or just a well laid plan and watching it come to fruition. I tried to stop about halfway through and finish it the next day, and then I realized I was on the last chapter. It held my interest all the way through. "

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Masterpiece

"One of the best stories iv ever read brought me to tears more then once, was chefs kiss"

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Buying this book!

"I love how the modern dialogue fits with the place of dragons. When Kara’s in her thoughts you remember she’s from a different place. The plot is unique and moves quickly! The detail of the dragons, the troll, and more are excellent."

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A hearbeat

"This is a very good story. The heroine have really a great heart. I think there is place for her to grow even more. Perhaps in a sequel? Thank you for sharing this story."

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Crossing in a heartbeat

"Love the fantasy. Great read"

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Quantum Leap into Love

"This is a brilliant, highly visual and emotive story with highly Loveable characters, a good dose of deep magic and a wonderful heroine who discovers her strength and Loveablility by making friends wherever she goes through her inherent kindness, sharp mind, quick wit and the ability to unite what once seemed impossible to. And then there are the awesome dragons...and her Love Dirgen. Absolutely wonderful tale, I highly enjoyed and immersed myself in in one sitting...please weave more such juicy tales for us! 😊🌹👏"

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Great story!

"I absolutely loved this book. I couldn't put it down. If you like dragons and adventure, give this book a look."

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Crossing in a Heartbeat

"Absolutely a great story. I love it, there's action adventure and romance. Enough cliffhanging to keep readers intrigued till the end which is also good. Love this book. "

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Great read

"Thanks so much for story. I loved all the unpredictable twists and turns"

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Amazing story

"The Story was amazing. The characters were so real and you could understand why they did things. "

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Crossing in a heartbeat

"Very good and refreshing story. Emphasis on love, friendship and respect in stead of hatred and war. Very well written. Thanks to the author for sharing the story with us."

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Crossing in a heartbeat

"I love this story. I hope there's a book 2 to it. The writer left it open to add to the story . I hope they do. "

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Crossing in a Heartbeat

"Everyone that loves fantasy stories, should read this one!! I read it in a heartbeat and loved every moment!! Interesting, funny, amazing plot and characters, just a tiny bit of drama and romance included. A story of a great adventure, friendship, justice and last but not least.. love!! "

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Crossing in a heartbeat

"This is 1 of the best books I've read. I'm a huge fan of Terry Brooks, this is up there with his in my opinion. Enjoyed every part of it. Very sad it's finished, but with a talent like yours, I would be very disappointed if you didn't carry on with many more. Good luck to you, carry on!"

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Wonderful story

"Great read, refreshing, original and easy to get involved in the story. I enjoy it and was reluctant to get to the end. Thank you. "

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CROSSING IN A HEARTBEAT

"Definitely the best book I've EVER read!!! And I ove reading. This story with all it's people, earned my love and gratitude at how wonderful they all re. From Kyra becoming Kara and people noticing the difference. The change in attitudes of everyone towards her and her own, from being a sad, lonely girl, to becoming beloved by everyone, trolls, people, dragons, little people, it was so beautiful to see her grow into what she became... I think tht the only thing I hated was finlly reding THE END. Books this good and satisfying, should never have a final. Congratulations for a wonderful and supremely magical book which I loved from beginning to end!!!"

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Spectacular

"I would give more then 5 stars if possible...great book. I loved the main character. Keep writing"

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Excellent Story!

"Loved everything about this book. Read it in one sitting! "

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Enthralling as always

"I love your gift of warping me into the book such that I am part of the story and very invested in the outcome of the main characters! Kudos "

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Crossing in a heartbeat

"Great plot and characters! So original!"

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