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Warning this story will make you cry.

"This story made me cry and laugh more than a story has in a long time. It definitely is about god providing what you need. This story was so well written. My only fear is the diabetes from all of the frosting sex. Lol "

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Absolutely fantastic story!

"I absolutely love this story. I am all forColton and Lexi 😊 "

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Great 👍

"Lovely story, great characters. Loved it"

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Splintered Heart

"Enjoyed the story. Well written full of humour and heartwarming. "

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lol

"This was a wonderful story to read and I thoroughly enjoyed it "

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Splintered Heart

" Nice and entertaining story . Well done 👏👏👏👍👌"

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Splintered Heart

"As another reader stated, I have never cried in the first chapter of a book! But my crying continued in so many places. You write extremely well and are able to create a picture that is so vivid in my mind. There was a part of me that thought this might be autobiographical, the feelings so strong! It is also obvious that you put so much of the world around you in your writing. I hope you continue to write! Thank you for sharing your talent! PS. Just drown out any critics like “Charlie Browns teacher”!"

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Heartwarming and Spicy!

"I loved Lexi and Colton's love story! I love a story that cannot only bring me to tears, have me cracking up but also be incredibly tantalizing. My only critic is the grammar needs to be finessed and I am not sure if the characters of Jo and Jolene got swapped during dress shopping chapter or if the names being so similar made things confusing. 5 stars though!"

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Loveeeee it!

"Awesome story.. thankyou for the story.. i really really love them.. its sweet, and the feel of love is everywhere.. thankyou.. "

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Great story

"It’s a love story for the ages. Love reading about positive male role models. "

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Some scent of Nora Roberts

"I was so glad to read this novel. Very few negative critics to address, so many points to praise. Delightful hours of reading"

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HEARTFELT ❤️ 💙 💜

"This story moved me in so many directions so many times. This was truly an OUTSTANDING 2nd chance love story. I laughed, I cried, both tears of joy and tears of sorrow, I even felt Lexi's anxiety, but most of all, I felt the love."

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Lovely book

"Lovely book. Thoroughly enjoyed it. But it’s the frosting that kept me entertained the most. "

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Really good

"The story was really good and heartfelt. I loved how the characters evolved without being overly stuck on stupid as is what happens wirh sime drawn our stories. This one was beautifully written and executed. "

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Splintered Heart

"Great book"

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Splintered Heart

"This is the 2nd time reading this book and I loved it even more it's a beautiful story very well written and good flow highly recommend this book "

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I liked it

"I loved it. Beautiful lovestory. Strong female character. Very patient and smart male carattere. I'll read other books of this author. Editing should be done."

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Loved it!

"I absolutely loved this book. It was extremely sweet, full of so much love and written was beautifully. Not too much drama too which is a really nice change. Everyone needs a Colton and Ms. Christine in their lives. "

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Splintered Heart

"Loved the story, a little too good to be true! But what we all want our lives to look like. Not that I like it, more of a climax/conflict and resolution might have been added for more dramatic effect. More Proofreading as there were a lot of Grammar /Spelling errors. Otherwise a great riveting story with lots of love and happy ever after and a good amount of spice! Great job, keep writing !"

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Splintered heart

"OH MY HEART! I have never cried so much reading a novel! Following along while she grows and overcomes huge challenges in the most realistic way had me crying along with her for the ride! The last quarter had (in my opinion) went over that fine line of believable to predictably sappy. Also there are a lot of autocorrect mistakes but nothing that breaks the flow. Overall, I really enjoyed this novel!"

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