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Those three words

"A beautiful story so far. "

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Those Three Words

"This story got your attention quickly in the beginning. Lots of emotions with building of characters & issues that life throws at U. The bantering between Flex & Declan is a precursor to a under current relationship that was slowly building. Just a few grammar errors that editing would have caught, otherwise great story & writing skills so far. "

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Those three words..

"I like the flow so far. Not too fast,not too slow. Just the right amount of questions coming to mind ... -great plot so far"

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So touching

"Its so beautiful. Only on 3rd chapter and I feel so attached already. Lex seemed to have been a wonderful person and wished there would have been more chapters about them. Couldn't wait for the rest of the chapters."

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