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Ruination

"I love the author's dark plots. A short and awesome read. Do give it a try guys! "

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Neat!

"So this story was very short, I liked that! And even though it was very short, you managed to add in lots of detail. I really enjoyed the plot twist at the end, it was very interesting! Nice story!"

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Sci-Fi horror with a classic streak, and time efficient minimalism - A short story!

"Ruination by TeddyRose1191 (on #Inkitt) Written like classics from old paper magazines, the kind our grandfathers enjoyed, and still into the future, as sci-fi deserves. The story is darkly humorous, also tragic and sad. The writing style is fluent, and the limitation of only one chapter length does not really hurt the story. After reading I would have wanted variants of the story, added as additional chapters. The format is OK, or better (I don't judge too much), and so are grammar and text flow. A quick reading that is not just another loony babbling alien abduction! Check it out, dear readers."

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Great work

"Although I’ve only gotten to read one chapter of this story so far, I am very intrigued and can’t wait to read more. Very well written, nicely done"

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