Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

very emotional writer

"Amazing! You are very good writer, the way you have put forward the tragedy of those children, their feelings, and sufferings you are so good want to read from you more........."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
very good style

"wow... this was a very strong and influential piece of story, with a very good plotting. the starting and ending was just a twist.... the child killed in the story was so sad but i just loved it"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation