Inkitt
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Jenk

"Early days yet but promises to be s good read"

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Im waiting Queen

"Please come update before i lose my mind 🙌🏾🤠"

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Very good so far, getting ready to finish it soon ♡

"Very good and heartwarming so far, also funny. "

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Pretty good so far

"I like that it’s in a person perspective "

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Covered in ink

"Really enjoying the story"

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Interesting

"The this story isnt over yet, I really like the main character Hazel, she is relatable for me in how I act. All the other characters are pretty cool, they all have fun personalities. My only real complaint is that most chapters feel like filler with a few paragraphs of plot. There are also some confusing structural issues with time jumping and character interactions without naming them. Outside of that I feel like there is some real potential for this story."

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