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In Pursuit

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Summary

Jack is a criminal. A bad guy, you could even say. And it's always been that way, with his friends right by his side. But one day, all that changes when Jack finally meets Ellie. She's a good person- kind, considerate, a model citizen. And Jack may be bad, but Ellie can really see the good in him. And Jack may not realize it, but he wants to be good, too. How will Jack change his views- and his attitude- and engage pursuit of his dreams? Will he succeed? Or will he continue to be just as rotten as he always has been?

Genre
Action,Humor
Author
Tokat
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

Adrenaline pumped through my ears as I let out a whoop, and laughed. The wind felt refreshing as my friends and I drove extremely fast, in a pursuit- as the ones being pursued.

Now, pause, real quick- I bet you're real confused. I don't blame you.

The name's Jack. I'm a professional, well, bad guy- in technical terms, a criminal. Leader of my team.

And I'm being pursued with my friends- Trevor, Max, Terry and Will. You could say they're my coworkers.

To the people of town, we're the baddest guys around. But to us? We're just a normal group of friends having fun. Extremely criminal fun, that is.

And I'm here to tell you the story of how I went from a bad apple to a goody two shoes- all because of one lady.

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Shocking

Good Writing

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Good Writing

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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