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Strawberries & Smoke❤️

"I really enjoyed reading this story, Zane and Harry are absolutely amazing characters. Would recommend this book to everyone.❤️ "

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Strawberries and Smoke.

"Riveting read. Description of highs and lows of emotions and fears very well laid out. Didn't want to put it down! Had a very busy family week end, so had to read all last night to finish the story. College years were less interesting for me. No real relationship until I was 22, but then. Fell in love at 24 whilst doing a chemistry PhD and we have now been married for 51 years. Have read one of your shorter stories before, that I also enjoyed. Will look for more. Thank you for writing the story."

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So good and wholesome

"I really enjoyed this story. I enjoyed how Zane and Harry were complete opposites but they ended up actually being a great match in the end. Harry was the calm Zane needed and Zane was the outgoing nature Harry needed and it worked so well. There were a few times Harry would annoy me because he was so green and instead of voicing it he would go all freaked out mannequin and freeze up. But I'm glad that by the end of the book Zane had found his footing not only in Harry and his family's life but also in his own life and that was such a good feeling especially for Zane. "

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