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What is your opinion?
Rooting for the main character
"Hoping the main character ends up with the guy who is deserving of her. "
Good book
"Oh I didn’t love the finish. Surely it could have gone a bit more. I want them to get together. "
Okay....
"I am not a fan of the characters or story line especially the ending. I think the writing itself is good and you have some good potential. However, this story was off for me. The ending fell flat and we didn't get any closure. She is better off without him but maybe in the long run after they both grow up they could make it work but you didn't push through to that. Keep writing as you have the potential there to write something really powerful. "
