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A feel good story

"I loved it"

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Love

"I love it, great story and all. "

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Karma

"If ypu want fluffy romance some slice of life or little bit of growing up drama this is the book for you. Although some of the plot still needs to be edited but when edited it will be great and make a little more sense. That doesn't mean it isn't great cause it is. If like myself you needed a PG-13 book halfway meeting MA-15 then this is the book. It is a good break from cave man tarzan possessive guys who are emotionally manipulative and usually a hypocrite living in a world of double standards where 15th centuries or better yet 1950's backward mysogynistic culture is being deemed as desirable then this is the book. "

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Amazing and innovative

"Love it. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is ok with you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Karma

"It was a good book"

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A great story

"I loved this story so much I don't know what to say. Good luck."

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Karma - quite a strong thing

"To start from the most important, after reading the story , I caught myself thinking that the author did a great job! She was able to get the attention of the reader, to interest him/her. That is the most important part when writing a book, I guess. The gist was really a good one. A young girl named Karma faces so many hardships and obstacles during her life. She is ignored by her mates. This story can teach one how to fight and persevere despite all the hatred and unfairness. It taught m a lot... Life is like a boomerang! What goes around, comes around!"

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good story**

"nice story but it could be more better by some plot twists,drama,emotions but overall it was a cute story...😊"

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Enjoyed it!

"This was an enjoyable read. From the beginning I wanted to know how the main character would navigate everything that was going on around her and how she would mature from it. Her friends are interesting and make important character foils. The romance also builds nicely. I felt especially connected with the main character whenever she was with her mother. It was wonderful to see a strong and vulnerable character develop along with the plot."

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