My Valentine

"I love the first piece I have read so far! It brings lots of emotion and feelings. The way you describe each emotion or each thing that happens with an object or place lets the reader get an example of how you might feel. I love writing these kinds of things and love even more to read them. It was beautiful to compare it to the rivers or even blood cause I've done the same in my older poems. So it's great to relate and see others similar. Keep on writing! I would focus more on one emotion and changing the layout. It can get complicated for some people to read the parts and have it change scenes if that makes sense. But overall fantastic book! I can't wait to see what's next :) Just format it better and work on spacing, and you should be good. "