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I like itt
"Good overall."
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Completely loved it!
"Such a great story. Loved the plot and all the details. Good job. Keep up the amazing work."
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Changing affection
" What I love about this book is everything is good and the bad that so many people can relate to. I love Aubrey and Erza love story even when It started out wrong for stupid Boss I mean crazy coward man jeron. Erza had character and cared about people's feelings and well being . What I didn't like about the book was jeron and declan was scamming and greedy only thought about themselves. Yes I love to recommend this to my friend who loves drama and real life stuff that in a book. Why I gave you all 5 stars is because this book had me up at night I didn't rush I took my time reading it."
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Happy!
"Nice change of pace, interesting, beautiful end"
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Changing Affection
"Loved it! Wished there was more"
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Changing Affection
"I really liked the plot in this story. It was overall a good read. However, there were a couple areas that the name Athena came up. I'm thinking it was supposed to say Aubrey? Also, I never thought I would ever say this but in my opinion it has too many sex scenes. The last two or three I literally skipped over. Don't get me wrong I like steamy scenes. But, I would suggest that maybe you could cut down some of the scenes towards the end. I would like to see more of an epilogue. Maybe show a glimpse of the wedding or future with kids. Talk more about the business. Introduce Asher to a woman in this book and then write his story in another book. All in all, great job! Keep writing! I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future. "
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Changing affection
"My favourite part is when Ezra and Aubrey started having feelings for each other My worst part is when Ezra was sent to prison and and was far from Ezra I recommend this book to all gangsters that there is always a good side of them even if they don't believe in love I"
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