What is your opinion?
Enjoyable
"I did really enjoyed the book learnt new words and its very detailed, I could see it in pictures as I read "
Impressed
"I started reading this book with low expectations but after a while I started to get invested in all the character's stories and how they relate to each other. I really hope you can write a full book. I'm totally hooked!"
Hooked
"I would like to see this short story turned into a full story."
More Please.
"Too many unanswered questions for this to be the end. Who is the hooded figure? What exactly happened between her parents? Who wrote the suicide note? Why didn't her Dad answer her letters? When are Bethany, Vivienne, and Jax going to have a threesome? (totally gotta happen at some point) What other family secrets are going to come out now? Will Bethany and her Dad be able to build some kind of relationship? Will horny Vivienne end up fucking Bethany's hot Dad? (my guess would be, probably. You know, just to make sure things don't get to normal 😉😋). Please write more of this story! The only part I didn't like was "The End". The story definitely doesn't feel finished. After this short bit I already feel connected to and invested in the characters and their lives. I need to know what happens next! Please don't leave us hanging! *Also what colour hair does Jax have? You said that he's tall, slim, and athletic, with long hair, but not knowing the hair colour is messing up my ability to picture him. "
