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Thoughts in the dark

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Summary

Damian made me do this, you don’t got to read it but these are just thoughts that are deep at least to me. If you relate that’s good and that you are not alone.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Beautiful Murder

Their screams are only heard

By the wind and their killers

Blood and rain feed the soil

As their bodies get swallowed by her

But as a mother, she will not let these lands look like a war zone

Instead, she takes the bones down the ground, roots grow out of them

The roots are her arms, hugging them into a tight blanket

She lets them grow flowers and trees

To tell the story of their life

A life that was easy, a life that was open minded with curiosity

Instead of torture and slaughter

She sometimes cries

To let her children know

That it still pains her when she remembers

Remembers the screams, the cries, their dead bodies, lifeless

But her children bloom towards her

They grow, they swallowed her tears in gratitude that their mother remembers

Telling her to not cry, she made them alive again

They might have died by those who promised yet lied with their blades

Cutting their tongues and made them forget who they were

Now, people look at them in awe people hug, touch them gently

They might have been murdered, their bones giving that flower it’s bright color, the trees it unique shape, Mother smiles at each one

What a beautiful murder they left behind

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