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loved the writing style and also the plot ,perfection in details keep it up

"liked the plot and the writing style also the vocabulary and erotic words used . also liked the way plo started and the detailing of the cjaracters "

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Love this

"I really love this "

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Gay

"Wish it was more love it"

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Man love

"The storyline is realistic and gripping. Very very enjoyable. Interesting characters"

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Updates

"Good so far looking for more chapters "

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The forbidden lust

"Is my first time reading any of your books this is really good I hope you update soon."

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Amazing😍😍

"Loved all ur book.. And this book also... Looking forward for more interesting updates... "

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Hot

"At first I didn't like the time jump, it made me a bit confused about the plot. But eventually I got used to it. I think the best part is Elroy's character development. I also really liked some of dialogues, they were really fluent and realistic. I'm looking for more chapters"

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Great

"Seems like something I have read before, the plot is not giving what it's supposed to give, anyway I stand corrected as I'm still in the middle of reading, so far so good."

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