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A new Earth

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Summary

JUST READ IT IS GREAT

Genre
Romance,Scifi
Author
LAELLE
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Kiddnapper

It started off as an ordianary Friday. I woke up, got ready for school. We left the house, and then, my life flashed before my eyes everything was wrong the houses around me where floating, the dogs and cats where floating as well, and the signs off the streats where flying around dumping in to everything. I looked to the right and there was my best freind Jack. “Jack!” I called out. He hear me and truned to me. “Ryan what in the world is going on.” Jack called out back to me. It was at that very moment that I realize that it was not only me and Jack who were floating around. Everyone in town was floating in the sky. I looked down and saw her. She was not human she had the body of a human but she had long hair with golden bands holding it together there were many bands in her hair. There was also jewls, stones, and leaves in her hair. She wore a dress that made her look like she was from Ancient Rome. She had rings around her ankles and rests and had long elf like ears. “There! Thats the one!” She called out as she was flying towards me. I should have been scard but before I could act she started to sing or do some sort of call that made me fall into a trance to where I was calm and could not move. Then, “ZAAAAPPPP!!” it was lights out I could not see nor hear anything. But I could feel my body being raped around in some kind of net. Then I woke up in a bed made of gold and had sliky sheets. There was a window in the room I looked over to see that I was in space and there millons of other people in cages that held air in so they could breathe. They all looked at me some confused, some filled with hate, some scard, and some looked as if they were souless no emotions. I was afriad but then she came in the one I would belive captured me. “I am Nola, I am sorry that you will be only one who will live.” She said to me. I took a step back in fear. Then looked to the window and saw the cages start to open. “NO!! STOP THIS PLAESE!” I yelled at her. “As I said I am sorry it had to be this way.” She said then looked to window and started to cry. "Are you?" I asked Nola. "Crying, yes I don't like this anymore than you do honestly but please understand that I would be out there with them if I did not follow the rules." Said Nola while still crying. I was about to say something like well do something about it but then I realized. That that was a stupid thing to say. "What or who are you?" Nola asked me. I was about to tell her but then I saw Jake. "JAKE NO!!!!" I screamed. He saw me and reached out his hand. I ran to the window. I truned to Nola and cried "Help plase!". She came to the window reached her hand through it and pulled him in the room. "Oh my gosh, thank you." I said to Nola. "Hurry hided him now." she said quitly to me. I nodded and we helped Jake in to a secrect compound that only Nola and a few others knew about. Nola and I then left Jake alone. Nola then said, "Now you must come with me." I nodded tell okay I trust you. Then we left the room.

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