Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Love it
"Overall, the story is great! I love the concept of an erotic thriller. Perfect portrayal of a Dom x defiant, shy Submissive. Characters are well developed. First-person was interesting. Except for the fact I'm a dude, I actually felt like I WAS her. I felt like a submissive little kitten. Grammar. I get it. I know English might not be your first language. I'd run them through Grammarly, then go through and fix word order in certain places. In a book, Quotes end the paragraph, aside from any notations(like translations) that need to be added."
Sugar
"The book is disjointed and uncoordinated making it hard to comprehend. There is need for improvement "
