What is your opinion?
The moon wolf diarors
"Awesome story. Enjoyed it very much"
Moon wolf diaries
"Very enjoyable to read "
Freaking awesome !!
"Wow…you covered every angle! I’m not a fan of male on make relationships/mating BUT you did it with style and I truly applaud you!!!"
The moon wolf diarys
"I have to say you are a very talented writer ,and I was hooked .I never put this down unless I had to take a bathroom break .I read straight through the night couldn't put it down til I finished reading the whole book .I enjoyed all of it ."
Legacy of the moon wolf
"I thought is was a good story. I like the happy ending and the fact that there was not cliff hanger to keep you wondering about the ending."
It was pleasant
"This story sould have been more captivating. The base of the story Is good but the développement you make Is too naive. You are lost in some details to force the reader to like the main character but at the end, it doesn't work. You used superficial and childish stat ments like you remind at each chapter how much the main character have been hurt and broken heart. You keep to usé the sâme words, the same sentences. Sorry but it's boring. Also, you keep trying to convince the reader how much the main character Is loved and adored by everyone for this purpose, you only gave us à list of car name and Luxurious brand, and at the end that give the impression that the main character isn't love but receive pity of Is friends, mates and family, this Is the childish side. You should have developp the connexion between the main character with his 9 mates liké during the first transformation in each personnalities. Each mates could have share this transformation and induce à développement of their link. You could have 9 more chapters, one for each mates to help the reader to share the link between the main character with each mates. Also, I don't like the main character that seems to be selfish although Hé must bé the king of everyone. Hé Is Nice but selfish. You have tried to describe him as à warrior but Hé never fight not even to protect the oméga community. But Hé have powers but never usé it, hé prefer to be saved than save others. For me he is weak and selfish and I don't like this character. But but but, If i write this comment Is because, like I write at the beginning, the base of the story Is good. The idea of à semi God that transform in différents supernaturals being Is à really idea but the développement of this idea Is too much superficial. Continu to write! "
