Interesting

"This story is set in a dystopian world. Sci-fi lovers would definitely like it. It's easy to follow. There are some really good twists in it. The characters have distinct personality and three dimensional. I actually like the chosen one troupe, but it should be justified. Everyone's reason to save Terry felt conventional and not essential. Apart from being an ex resistance leader's daughter, there was nothing special about her. First her professor saves her, then it's revealed that the guy who was hired to kill her just blurted out his plans to the people who would save her which seemed too conventional for the story. Secondly, the government is portrayed as bad and trying to mind wash people, but there's no reason to why they are doing it. Without any explanation, it becomes tough to care about the cause. There were some spelling mistakes and tense switches that could easily be fixed by lots of editing. Nonetheless, it was enjoyable. Recommended to dystopia lovers"