What is your opinion?
American Samurai - Hatamoto
"Quite a riveting, action-filled story. So very happy the good guys won & were acknowledged & rewarded. Thank you."
American samurai hatamoto
"Story was awesome. I enjoyed the way the characters interaction with each other. Loved that they always had the others back. "
American Samurai: Hatamoto
"Great story! Riveting, fast paced and suspenseful! About strong men and the strong women behind them taking on the evil that threatens good people everywhere. Gory, bloody and violent, this story doesn't hide behind political correctness. When evil attacks innocents, it takes people who will fight on the same level to stop it in its tracks. "
Excellent
"I like the war genre, humanity and love"
American samuri
"The writings need to be checked before posting.vegy good plot. Would defo read this auther"
Great so far!!
"The novel is great thus far an I'm eagerly scrolling chapter after chapter. I'm far from a grammar expert but I've found that almost every location an some times names are missing. It would have made for a much more pleasant read with those details not left to the imagination."
Page Turner
"This book was great from the beginning and I couldn't stop reading it from the moment I picked it up it is quite the page Turner and I loved the book all I have to complain about is the many errors in some sentences they would just run off and not end properly and some didn't finish a thought but all in all the story was great loved it thanks fro the read!"
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American samurai
"The story line was just over the top. The weapons were alright, but what is with all the missing words ,cities, towns, states. Not ending sentences this was long and not realistic. "
Good
"Good action "
Definitely interesting
"Great action. Love the plot. Impressed by the knowledge. However, something is up with the print. Words are missing. It's not critical but it tends to interrupt the flow. Great story telling."
Needs a little work
"I really like the prologue of this story, where you’ve described the Samurai and their bushido, or way of life. But the problem is, it says nothing about the story you’re writing, and the first two chapters confused me a little. On the writing bit, I think you should edit and proofread your story a couple of times before uploading it. There are many typos and spelling mistakes, and these minor issues make the novel look shabby. I also see a lot of unnecessary exclamation marks and spaces between the end of a sentence and the full stop. Weed out these silly mistakes, and you’ll make the story more enjoyable for the reader. Besides these issues, the story itself is fine. You could improve on the quality of your writing. That way you can heighten the drama by bringing your characters to life."
