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I am not sure what to say

"What can I, or anyone say. Your Story, your characters, your pace, your ending, it was a roller coaster of a ride. I couldn't stop. I really, really enjoyed everything. The only thing I have to complain about is that I can't find anything to criticize. Wow."

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A powerful story

"A really touching story about how all of us struggle to fulfill our dreams and how a single event can shatter everything you’ve worked for. Being an Indian, I think it was a lot easier for me to relate to this story. I’ve been through the pressure of having your parents tell you that what you’re trying to achieve is pointless, and you have to get a ‘real’ job like everyone else. I like how Rachana is in a constant struggle with her emotions and how she manages to come out on top eventually. I haven’t read the whole story yet, but it looks great the way it’s going. The skater, Jenny Nguyen is also an important part of the story and I like how you’ve managed to convey how important she is in Rachana’s life. All in all, a great story, and I wish you luck with this novel!"

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