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Lights, Camera, Murder!

"If you like horror stories, scary movies and spooky campfire yarns, this is the book for you. A modern masterpiece – thrilling and surprising - it delivers on all fronts; highly recommended!"

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Children will lke it

"I know I’m not a kid, but I still had fun reading your children’s horror story. It was quite enjoyable! The best part about this story is that it makes absolutely no sense at first. I mean I couldn’t seem to follow what was going on till I was at least 5 chapters in. But as you continue to read, more and more of the story starts to reveal itself, and you begin to understand what’s going on. I’d like to congratulate you on the idea of the story. It’s difficult to write for kids, and you seem to have done a splendid job of it. I’m sure if this book gets published that it will be read by hundreds of kids the world over. On a more critical note, I think you need to pay more attention to the punctuation and grammar as there are minor typos throughout the story. Clean these up, and you’re good to go!"

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