What is your opinion?
I really enjoy this book. The story seems very well written.
"So far the story seems good. I really like leon. Cant wait to see what bella turn into. "
The Dawn of the Forgotten Destiny
"So far, I love it!! Some pieces are hard to follow, but I really can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds!!"
I love this book
"I love itttt"
The dawn of the forgotten destiny
"It jumps around alot very hard to get what's going on,you just get into what's happening and then we go to someone else Great characters though and interesting story so far"
Has potential but needs help.
"Ok, so I love the plot of this story and I think it has great potential, but your writing is sparatic. I don't understand her powers or the rules of the universe she in living in. You need to explain what she is, what he powers are, how she became so close with her adoptive mom and her college friends, what she looks like, how she is feeling in these critical moments... Give details on her training, important moments between her and her family and friends, and at least give a general description of how she was poorly treated within her pack. This book has been confusing me on so many points and I am trying to keep up but you need to explain a few things. "
Dawn of the forgotten destiny
"Good story. I hope you update it soon. Keep up the great writing. Thanks"
