Hush

"Hush, was a very good story, however, my only faults; will be the dialouge, starting a new paragraph after another person talks is a mistake some writers do. Characters were interesting, and the ending got me hooked and made me to go beg for more. Punctuation/grammar skills was pretty good. But did miss a couple mistakes. I loved the plot! Well done! Nothing I disliked at all, only the dialouge. Punctuation too, but not everyone is perfect with punctuation! -Noah Rowland."