What is your opinion?
Matteo and Elise
"Waiting for his open statement about his love... Good story"
Nail biting!
"It leaves you wanting more every chapter! I love this story line and it almost makes you feel every feeling they are having. It makes it easy to visually see it all happening!"
Dangerous Spindle
"Great writing sexy and suspenseful I love the pace and can’t wait to see what happens next!"
Love the story don't want it to end
"Love this story don't want it to end just continue "
Erotica
"The scenes are so vivid it like amovie flashing before your eyes very good plot keep it up dearie"
Dangerous Spindle
"Her story is always riveting and engaging. Some spelling mistakes with homophones and punctuation of dialog but otherwise everything is good. "
Oh hell no!
"She better lay down some ground rules! He can’t just be using her and then leaving without any aftercare! No sir! Love your story so far by the way 🙃"
Dangerous spindle
"Awesome book"
Dangerous Spindle
"Great story, it’s keeping me entertained "
Strong Characters
"I am enjoying watching the development of the characters. The character that appears meek and mild on the surface has begun to show her strength and the strong and dominant character has begun to express his weakness in his need for companionship. Bravo, I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story."
love this!
"i absolutely love everything, cant wait to read more!"
Unique, quirky, and exciting!
"I love your style of writing: it's quirky and individualistic, above all else it says "read me - or else!" Great story, build-up, explosive eroticism. Just take your time to get the tense, grammar and punctuation perfect (sorry, I'm a perfectionist and I believe all writing should be presented to a pristine standard if you want to promote yourself as a writer). Do double-check as you go along, do proof-read and final edit before you post - do all that and you'll fly, girl!"
Fire!
"Ohh! I love 💕 so much it's amazing girl, I think you should keep going! ~ Lilly grace ❤️"
Story
"I d9nt understand all the story.. why does he keep pulling her back in if he doesn't care..it's not fair to her"
Love story of boss & designer
"Beautifully & well described "
Smiley
"Very good a few grammatical errors but very good"
Dangerous Spindle
"Fast spiralling into a hot and steamy dalliance, which readers are sure to enjoy!! "
Good read!!
"I was amazed the entire time while I was reading this story. It is perfectly written and the way the story and the characters are presented is just wonderful. Keep up the good work author! Thanks for sharing :)"
SUCH a great read!
"I love how you build up tension in the chapters. I want to learn more and Matteo and El! I loved reading this! Keep up the great work!"
Dangerous Spindle
"I like the way the story is focused through out. I enjoy reading their time together and how he is finding conflict within himself."
