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Not Enough!

"I'm really enjoying this story but enough with the foreplay.........give us more chapters! 5 -10- 100!"

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I, for one, welcome our new overlords! ;)

"This read like a well-written science fiction short story with good plot and character building and it was a very hot readon top of that. 5/5 and craving for more. "

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Captivating

"Had me wanting more "

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Exquisite

"I honestly wish there was more. This is possibly the greatest short story I've read in a while, truthfully. I wasn't expecting for such a good outcome, but I'm glad I tried it out. "

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Really Amazing

"It is extremely amazing! Got goosebumps reading it. This story is exciting! I can't wait for more!"

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Love your theme

"I really liked it. Love the idea of demons enslaving the human race (as a book, not as reality!). Your writing flows and I'm eager to see the next chapter."

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new chapter??

"i loved this, it was kinda relatable anyway.. will there be a new chapter?? i love major's personality, he is a smug, sadistic, sexy asshole lol and zoe is trying so hard not fall for his traps, but soon she will know that once you get involved there is no way out.. anyway i'd love to hear more"

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More chapters!!!!

"More chapters please!!"

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Amazing

"❤️ Lovin it"

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I Need More

"Short and sweet, left me wanting more. (There WILL be more, yes?) A very good start. "

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