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It's enjoyable

"The story is rather humorous and relatable for people of any age and gender. The wording was a bit rough, but it did not take away from the plot. I'm interested to see if you write anything else that deals with fear in funny ways, such as comedy/horror, because after all, fear and funny are closer than we realize. Keep up the writing and thank you for the story."

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