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Captivating

"The writer submerges you into the story where you feel you're one of the Characters. They may say it's cliche, but do not take that lightly folks. This story will take you into it's magical world of witches, pack, Omegas, Kings and Queens who overcome obstacles that you are not sure which way they will go. Hold onto your seats and buckle up for a riveting ride into your new fantasy world!!! Fantastic work writer"

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Update?

"This book is really getting good. Thank you for sharing. I hope u r still writing this story. Please don't just leave it hanging. It's 2 good of a story for that to happen. Can't wait for the update and find out what happens. Thanks again"

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It says there is 26 chapters but it's only showing 25 chapters?

"I love this book I hope there's more chapters!!!!!!!"

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I really like it and so far it's been hard to even do anything else other than reading it

"This book is excellent in my opinion and I've recommended it to my best friend who also loves reading and I'm positive that she'll love it as much as I do because the plot of this story is enough to make one addicted if I may say so "

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The blessed luna

"Omg absolutely loving it!! I need more and can not wait to see how this book transforms especially allie. 😍"

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It's insane

"I think its messes up. The father screwed up big time and so did Xavier "

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The Blessed Luna

"I loved this story and I can not wait to see what’s next….."

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The blessed luna

"Well written great plot great characters interesting story great story looking forward to following chapters to see what happens to everyone "

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The Blessed Luna

"Is a very good book and the story is also very good and i like the transformation from allie"

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The blessed Luna

"Hurry up and write more "

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For whom the sarcasm tolls

"Done with a daft hand and hidden agenda of sarcasm. Plot twists and good character development."

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Hook, line,sinker

"This story is so amazing. Thought the author states it to be your type of cliche book, it is FULL of suspense, shocks, and you feel like your transported into the book and living like the character itself. "

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Blessed luna

"So interesting n vengeful in fact i cant sleep or stop reading. Thanks author "

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O my gosh I love this I want more I can continue to read this forever

"I love these kinds of books especially when I can’t put it down everything goes on hold until I finish. I would recommend this to anyone that reads these kinds of book. I hope your next book won’t tak long"

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The Blessed Luna

"I would recommend this book to all of my friends. I love the story and I can't wait to find out what happens next."

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A terrific story so far.

"So creative! I feel so sorry for Allie."

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Moonpack

"Very interesting book but does go on and on about allia a lot but doesn’t seem to be getting anywhere "

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Great Read! I'm hooked.

"Great story! I know it's meant to be a parody but the plot is so good that I find myself constantly checking for updates- "

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Blueangel

"Well, as I was reading the writer’s comments about all the cliché’s of werewolf life I thought it quite interesting. So I decided to take a peek. Well needless to say, I am quite hooked. Love the characters and the storyline. Dying for the next chapters. Great read."

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Love it

"I like the way you combine multiple cliches. Promising book. "

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