love is not over

"love is not over was one one of the best books I have read out of ever book i read on here and this is one of the books I was to have a part 2"

so amazing

"this story was so good! i cried, it was so sad towards the end"

Yess!!

"Ahhhhh BTS"

it is good.

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Interesting

"The plot that you have going is very interesting. It is short which is personally good for me when I want to complete a story in a short time. It really puts up a question that who is the brother and why he doesn't want them together. Overall, it need a little descriptive skills but from all the ffs I have read, I can tell you that your book is going to acknowledged! Keep writing! "

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Overall

"The story was good I didn't want it to stop and I really like that you had cliffhangers at the end of it. But you spelled 'While' wrong and that really tripped me up there were words that you forgot and there were lots of misspelled words, but overall you did good please read it over and fix the words that are wrong."

Love is Not Over

"Tbh I thought this was a Jungkook X reader, not a Jimin X reader next time put a JIMIN X READER???! and V's name is spelled wrong but it has very good potential"

A Story with Potential

"The plot often makes little to no sense. For example, how someone falls in love with another person after knowing them for maybe a little more than 24 hours, and later fights a long-time friend for her. In addition, while I am not a BTS expert, this all seems very out of character. (I'd hope Jungkook and J-hope aren't quite that prone to violence.) The writing style could use some improvement. It is very choppy and often repetitive. An attempt could be made to vary the words used and sentence structures in order to make the story more enjoyable. A bit of prose couldn't hurt, either. The formatting is strange in the beginning, but it improves later on, so I haven't much to say about it. The grammar is the biggest issue to me. The perspective and tense are rarely consistent, especially later in the story, and misspellings are common. Overall an issue is lack of consistency where it counts. (Taehyung is inconsistently referred to with either V, or 'teahyung,' His real name is in fact not spelled correctly once throughout the story.) Overall, not a fantastic story, but one with potential to improve. The author is very creative, and I hope to see more from them in the future."