What is your opinion?
Future Author
"I believe that this writer could definitely go somewhere with this. This story has a great story prologue and i believe that if she plays her cards right this writer could make a story full of suspense, mystery, and action. There are a few grammatical errors so I would suggest having a friend help edit as a new pair of eyes that don't know what is coming next can find far more errors, but remember that even the professionals with large publishers even mess up. keep up the great work i look forward to following this story on the edge of my seat."
My Opinion
"The writer paints pictures with her words. I wanted to read more of this story. The author obviously writes with passion and this is a good beginning. There are a few grammar errors but overall these did not detract from enjoying the story."
Wishful
"I was wishful from the beginning of the story that this would not be a "Prince saves Princess" tale, however I was not so lucky. It saddens me that young woman these days still feel that there needs to be a Prince in their lives to save them. My suggestion to the Author. I would highly suggest cleaning up your grammatical errors before submitting something like this for the whole world to see, and secondly, go to school forget about boys and get an education. If you wait for your Prince, you will never find you."
