What is your opinion?
My Review
"I liked the book! It was good, I have read it 2 times now and I am sorry that it took so long to write this review 😅. The plot is good so far, but you also don't have a lot of chapters to properly base the plot on, but I see that you are going to continue the book so that shouldn't be a problem for too long. A small way I would improve the story is by using fewer "Time Skip's" and just writing more. Coming from an author, I understand you really just want to get to the point, but it is important to fill the story (with details, characteristics, descriptions, etc.) it also forms more of a connection with the book and the reader. Another thing is that you have several grammatical issues, but they aren't that big so I wouldn't worry too much about it. I also understand if English isn't your first language, it would be hard to edit your grammar if you don't know proper English since you didn't grow up speaking it. Overall, the book is really good and I like it, I honestly can't wait for more. I also understand that writing is a lot of work so take your time (that was really hard for me to say since I am an intense book reader) and I will always wait for your updates!! Good job 👍🏽🎉🎊, keep up the strong work 🎀✨, and keep doing what you're doing🎈🎉, love your writing 🤍💗📖💖💕, and have a good day! 🎈🎆🎉🎊"
Love After Marriage
"This book is definitely recommended to those who love BTS or just Tae Tae being your idol 🙈💞 The story moves fast but I think that's the whole point of the story since it's called Love After Marriage 😄😁 Sooooo, show this book some love, lil' cookies 🌈😘💜 -Kookie 🍪💕"
