What is your opinion?
Awesome
"Fantasy It is nice!!!"
Needs Work
"I think the plot is a trope I see often in books, but the idea of him being her long-lost friend is a bit of a twist on the general "get married to the mafia" plotline. However, I think the grammatical and stylistic errors take away a lot from your story. I'm not sure if this is because English is not your first language or if perhaps you're a younger writer, but I think getting someone from Inkitt to edit for you would be a great first step. It's hard to get immersed in the plot when I'm stumbling over these errors, and I think the story would flow and be much easier to get into to evaluate for the plot and characters if these errors were resolved. So, I'd try to find someone on Inkitt to do really intense editing for you and then go from there. I think it's a great start, though. Keep it up!"
