What is your opinion?
I Will Kill For You
"Wow! I really enjoyed reading this story. It has a great level of anticipation and spiciness. I enjoyed the scenes that were created by the author and the characters, you could literally bond with some while hate on some. I enjoyed that the book took us to different locations and the specific details that the author tried to incorporate. A good read if you enjoy mafia, action and romance.."
I Will Kill For You
"Great story. Wonderful job on telling the story. The intrigue and drama was definitely suspense full Kept you right on the edge of your seat"
Good work
"I didn't read much but I liked the little I did. The book is certainly worthy of praise. "
Captivating
"The story is very captivating because you think you know everything in the beginning but new perspectives keep on peeling out and it keeps you in suspension. Well done author!! "
Pretty good
"I'm really not a fan of a lot of erotic novels, but the action and romance itself sold it for me. I certainly understand and enjoy the story and the concept itself, though there are spots where punctuation or spelling is off somewhat. I hope to see more stories from you, you have real talent."
Great read
"I'm not finished with the book yet, but I'm enjoying the read! Very interesting characters and drama that's happening. The spicey scenes are great - great descriptions. Also enjoying the characters and their interplay with each other. If you feel like an easy-reading and interesting book, this one is great!"
I would kill for you
"It's a good story I really like it"
Needs some work...
"I leave this review whole-heartedly knowing that you can make your story even stronger! These are my thoughts: The story has a clear focus in mind. It's the minute details you should pay more attention to. The plot; the world- and character-development need work. The reader is rushed through moments of transition from one place to another, that its hard to feel the weight of the overarching situation (which I won't spoil). As a result, I felt like an observer rather than a victim alongside the main character's in relation to what was going on. The story started off introducing every character without much dive into each character as an individual. Each character reacted to and rarely digested what was happening to and around them, which made it hard for me to feel the emotion that was delivered (very descriptively, which was well done). I find Ezekiel to be the most complex character of everyone, and because of this, I quite liked him, but everyone else was just there. I did appreciate your attention to descriptive language, and even use of figurative speech to convey--quite poetically--the environment in each character's eyes. There were very few punctuation and grammar errors, so I didn't knock any points off for those. They are an easy fix. Restating my main points: You are excellent with descriptive language and imagery, and the focus of your story is laid out. It's just a matter of organizing your plot; and aligning the changes in your setting and your characters with the main conflict that will bring your story more depth and clarity to the reader. Keep up the good work!"
