What is your opinion?
Epiphany
"Take the time to read these succinct word pearls. Wordsmithing is an art, and encouragement is the message here. Yes, as stated in another review, some phrases miss the flow mark, and the grammar is often unconventional. However, on balance, these pieces ooze authentic contemplation. Find and savour, 'the map of purpose', 'droplets of motivation' and 'the torture of sharing ourselves.' You won't regret the time spent on Epiphany, which will resonate beyond the reading time."
A Simple, Engaging Read
"While some of the language can be tidied up here and there, overall, the work presented gives an insight into common occurrences of today's youth which resonated with me as someone who also had similar feelings when growing up and reflecting on the world. Clear thought, much effort, all the best for future chapters! Can't wait to read more!"
Beta request
"Fingertips of fear seems like very odd wording, I think something else maybe tendrils would be a better choice “Of lost eyes missing hope” seems extremely out of place The problem I feel with your poem is that the verses read like individual phrases, there doesn’t quite seem to be a link in between them. Poetry should flow seamlessly from one idea to another. Though your main ideas are good the transitions are very abrupt and jarring "
